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Home»Our Blog»8 Ways to Write a Stunning Personal Statement

8 Ways to Write a Stunning Personal Statement

Opportunity DeskNovember 2, 20176 Mins Read
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There are a few challenges during a studentship that affect the further life. The first place in this list takes writing a personal statement. In fact, this is an opening line for a studentship: if you can’t cope with this task successfully, you may lose your chance to continue getting education right after school. Many school students take this challenge seriously, and they are right about that. One wrong step at this point may lead to the disaster.

Fortunately, you came across this article which means that you will reveal several effective methods to write a stunning personal statement that will help you get a scholarship and become a student of the college of your dream. The methods described in this article have already been tried out by thousands of students, and they can prove that these small tips have changed everything about their ideas of writing a great personal statement.

Here are the 8 Ways to Write a Stunning Personal Statement:

  1. Start with the big idea behind your statement

Your personal statement is where you can demonstrate yourself and tell more about your personality, your dreams, and the ideas that you stick to. It’s not like causal essay topics for college students that you choose in school and college. Here, you have to decide on your own what ideas will be perfect for the readers, what will help you stand out among the other applicants, and how to use the idea to your benefit.

Prior to writing an essay, it will be better to investigate what other applicants are writing. For instance, you can check the examples of personal statements or ask your friends to show their papers.

  1. Showcase your strong sides

We have already determined that in this type of academic paper you need to tell about yourself. But how to do that in such a way to stand out from the others? Here, you need to stick to the rule: none of the members of the commission board will trust you unless you will demonstrate the real results of your activities.

If you tell them that you are a leader, showcase that by some stories from your life. Showcasing and storytelling work perfectly to create a proper impression and generate emotions while reading. And this is a key to success.

  1. Never hide your personal achievements

Many applicants forget that every achievement can tell more about you than any words. If you have participated in some conferences, won some prizes or grants, and if you were the head of some school organization or group, make sure you have pointed out this information in your paper.

For the member of the commission board, it will be enough to see that you are the perfect candidate to get the scholarship in their educational organization.



  1. Work on the coherence

Of course, there are many details and pieces of information that you would like to introduce to your paper. However, it does not mean that you need to add them randomly. The personal statement should be logical and coherent, and all the facts that you present here must be connected to each other. If you still don’t know how to preserve the coherence of the text, we would recommend you to write an outline where you will note every point that you would like to cover in your statement. When you start to work on it, just make sure that you stick to these ideas.

  1. Proofread and edit

Mistakes will ruin even the best statements. If you don’t want to lose your chance to get to the university of your dream just because you’ve missed some articles, double check your writing.

Fortunately, today you don’t need to do everything on your own, as there are many services that help with writing issues. You can order proofreading and editing at a rather affordable price and make sure that everything is great with your writing.

  1. Ask for recommendations

If you know for sure that you want to become a student of some particular college or university, it will be better to consult the students of this organization first. You can find them in Facebook or LinkedIn easily. They will tell you what exactly the members of the commission board expect to find in your statement, what problems it will be better to cover, and what ideas you should avoid. They may give you a plenty of useful recommendations, so don’t miss this chance.

  1. Make it full with details that speak for you

The details make the story complete. When you showcase your strong sides or write about achievements, don’t forget to add some details that will help you highlight some of the aspects. Moreover, you may use this approach to show what you do the best. Of course, this method requires some storytelling skills, but we are sure that you can use it at least a couple of times to enrich your personal statement.

  1. Try to keep it short

There are so many things that you would like to tell to the commission board about yourself! No matter how many of them you have prepared, it will be better to shorten this list at least twice. The matter is that you have only a page or two to tell about yourself, and there is no space for everything that you want to tell. Therefore, you need to determine the ideas that will definitely work. If you have some hesitations, it will be better to consult your teachers, friends, and parents. They will help you make a proper decision and you will write a flawless statement.

If you have a couple of months ahead, you can make a couple experiments with your writing. However, if you have only a week, this guide will be enough to write a perfect statement having only one attempt. Just follow the recommendations and remember that this step requires from you some efforts and full dedication. So make it and get ready to student life in the college of your dream!

About the Author:

Richard Nolan is a professional educator and team building coach, sharing his experience in spheres of writing, blogging, entrepreneurship, and psychology. Richard writes for numerous blogs and gives useful tips for bloggers and students.

Currently, Richard works as a general blog editor for EliteEssayWriters.

You can connect with him via Facebook, Twitter, Google+

For more articles and tips, visit OD Blog.

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